Today I worked on writing. I went to the Eternal Camping script and I started to make some changes. Some of the changes are pretty small: for instance, adding a line of dialogue here and there or changing what someone says. Some of them are pretty large: there’s a whole new conversation early in the script. It’s kind-of rough at this stage so I’m going to go back in and edit it later. Finally some of the changes are fixing errors. For instance, there’s one scene that somehow escaped scrutiny where Antonio was being mentioned as Houston for a small part of the exchange. That has been fixed now. I’m going to keep making changes but for the most part, I concentrated on the first act and half of the second act today. Tomorrow I’ll focus on the other half of the second act.
All in all, this week is about improving the script!