Day 108: Script Edits: Act One

Now that the major change is done with switching Houston and Antonio’s character names, I’m going into the scenes they weren’t in to see which scenes I could improve and how. These aren’t major edits, mind you, but minor ones. It’s to make the dialogue a little better, a little more realistic, and a little more likely for a kid to say. It’s also fixing any new mistakes that I find. I went through Act One and did this. It’s been some time since I last opened the script and I’m actually happy because the time distance has given me a better perspective of what lines need to be worked on. Overall, I’m happy with the changes I’m making.