As you might know by now, the pitch video is split into two different parts: a fake teaser in the beginning using lines from the script and then a video of me trying to sell the movie to potential donors. I’ve been working on the script for both of them over the last couple of days. I’m spending today and tomorrow going over the script, trying to make it as good as I can at this stage even as I don’t plan to shoot it for a while.
So today I went over the script. As I’ve said before, this is really the first time I’ve ever written a script like this and so I’m making adjustments to all the lines that just don’t feel right yet. I’m sure that by the time I shoot the pitch script, I’ll have a good version that will help raise money for Eternal Camping!